AFG Frontscreen WIP Feedback Welcome

gateian

Hi guys,

Just working on the frontscreen for an upcoming xbox indie game and was hoping to get a bit of feedback from you talented people. I'm pretty happy with the the dircetion its going in and think the colour scheme is pretty much there, but need to work on the font. I'm trying to produce something that appeals to an american audience, but as i'm British, it's a little bit different to things I normally do.

Anyway, any feedback is welcome.

Notes

Is anything else going to be on the screen besides what's pictured above? seems to be alot of negative space unless alot of writing is going to cover it up.

gateian

It's crying out for a bit of extra text isn't it! Well nothing planned, so i'll have to think of something. There will be a menu system though, so it will probably look a lot better when I add that.